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Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Bimal K Srivastava's "Translucent Creatures" (short story, monster hunting, free)

Well told variation of two oft repeated themes - monster hunting & invisibility.

A man lists various real cases of the transparent tissue found in animal bodies, & a conjecture that may be there exists a creature that is fully transparent to human eye.

Later parts are a hunt for this creature. Near end, the protagonist begins feeling like a proper mad & paranoid professor, though the hunt itself is not uninteresting.

It's not a bad read if you can ignore a few flaws:

  1. Sometimes badly formed sentences - possibly because it's a translation (at least it felt like one).
  2. Occasionally pedantic.
  3. Unnecessarily set in Boston - making dialogs that feel like from small town north India appear out of place.
  4. Unnecessarily explaining that something is in India, marring the flow.

Fact sheet.

First published: 15 April 2009 at Kalkion. Actually, it felt like a translation, but the site doesn't tells us about that.
Rating: B.
Download full text from publisher's site.